Reading: Invention
What is
invention? (What activities did the writer have to engage in to
create the text?)
The invention is
a music recommendation service and custodian of the Music Genome Project, which
following crowd’s interest to pick up songs by system. Named Pandora Ratio, a
popular application on cellphones, such as Apple iPhone, iPad, iPod Touch,
Android and so on.
What is
being invented? (What ideas, practices, arguments, etc. are created by the
text?)
Because Pandora
nowadays becoming a really popular application around US and some other
countries. Based on this situation, author shared own knowledge about Pandora
and compared why people choose Pandora even though Pandora’s 700,000-song
library sounds puny comparing with Slacker.com or Spotify.
Reading: Arrangement
What is
arrangement? (What is being put in relation to what?)
This is a
research paper, shows author’s learning and arguments with Pandora or some
similar music system.
What is
being arranged? (How are the things being put in relation to one another?)
Tip: It may be a good idea to
make a visual of the arrangement of the essay.
Author began
this essay with showing Pandora’s work style, and lead to this company or this
application’s history and growing. Between Pandora’s developing, author analysis
company or founder how to collect crowd’s interest and how to let system looks
more intelligent and accurate to fit in crowd requirement. At the end of the
essay, author compared Pandora with Slacker.com and Sotify, which looks similar
music system with Pandora and even their library contains more songs, but
Pandora still people’s choice.
Reading: Revision
What is
revision? (What is the writer trying to change? For example, what
ideas, practices, etc.? What is the author’s argument?)
The author tried to show some pro and con
in this Music Genome Project, which used in Pandora. Argument in this essay is
about system’s accurate and intelligent by following human’s requirements.
What is
being revised? (What strategies are engaged specifically to help the
writer achieve the revisions?)
Author
used plenty of stories from Pandora how to solve customer’s question or trouble,
and also had a lot of database to show his invention. That information made
readers easier to understand and believe what he said.
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